Music Video - Draft One

Both Kirsty and I are really proud of our first draft. We both understand that there are a lot of improvements that we need to made and add a lot of things from our original idea and need to establish much more of a story line, but generally I feel we are off to a good start. 

There are a few things that I believe we need to improve on:

• Making the flashbacks more obvious with some kind of vintage filter (for a home video vibe).
• Change the green screen background we I feel it does not really fit with our video (maybe child drawn sea will be better).
• Some of the overlays are too faded so we should change the opacity.
• The black lines on the green screen need to be adjusted.