Music Video - Story Board Comparison (Draft One)

I created a side by side comparison of our animatic storyboard and the first draft of our music video. Looking at this I believe we have done rather well with keeping generally to the structure of the story board. However looking at this draft there is a lot that we need to change to make it of a more professional quality.
Next Kirsty and I are going to start making our own changes to the music video that we did not put in the storyboard. I feel that this will be a good next step in order make the video look much better and more professional.